続アドバイスお願いします

posted:パペット[ncVm2A/f994u01] 12/04/29 21:05:35
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前回は足や銃の角度について指摘して頂いたので
今回はそこを気を付けてみました

どこについてでもいいので
アドバイスよろしくお願いします


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6例の人[cAIdFuEVbIdH01] 12/04/29 23:07:48
え?あぁ、ハイ。

最初のに比べるとかなり良バランスだと思いますよ。
私的にはこれでも十分。

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